Phew! It has been awhile since I've last updated deviantart, hasn't it?
....y'know, for the 4 of you that'll read this. Ah, well.
Anyway, I've almost finished with a big project I've been tooling with for the last month or more. I've been writing again, but this time I've actually written something I'm at least happy with, and once it's complete I want to submit it to an editor and then a publishing agent. But, first, I'd like to put the opening of it (once it's done) on here and get a consensus/reaction from at least a few folks has to how it's coming along. Please, PLEASE brutally honest with me. Anywhoo, it's a horror story, st in a smal